Game idea

[WarDragon]

I plan to make on or the other game after i finish dk3 and my LOZ.

Suburban ninja

After years of living in the city of Blytheville. One teenage boy has lived a life of fear, beaten by his parents numerous times. He left them and decided to live on the streets. On one morning he saw a man dressed in black. He followed him to his hideout.
The man saw him and ask him what happened to him he looked like he was thrown away. The boy told him his story of what had happened to him. The ninja said he was a drug addict who only wanted money. He told him get away from me or I'll kill you. The boy started to go away then for no reason he comes back and wait out side of his door. 3 years later the ninja said damn! you must have very good patients to wait here. Why are you waiting here anyway. The boy said there was no where for me to go and you're the only whoever noticed me but if you want to take my life then go ahead. Without hesitation the ninja drew his sword and nearly cut his arm. The ninja asked why didn't you run away. The boy said why did you spare me. The ninja thought that maybe he can use this boy for future use so he finally took him in. He progress to learn the way's of the ninja. After long months and training he finally becomes a ninja.

Missions
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Stealing rare items
Breaking into people homes and taking items
fight a couple of local gangs.
assassinations of important people
take over the city.


Postal espionage

A postal worker, Travis Johnson, moved to a big city because the living conditions were getting pretty bad. His job was transferred to a company named Speedy Express a company that delivers packages all over the world. The old company still wanted him to stay for a reason. He contacted his old company UPX to tell them everything was allright. One day while working he noticed a package that looked like an ak-47. he opened it and it was a ak-47. he called the police and have them to check it out. when the police arrived they were acting very suspicious. Then the boss came in and asked him what is going on. The police explained to him what happened. then the police just left. The boss was very angry and told travis that if he would tell anyone else he and his relactives would perish. Now get back to work. He knew he couldn't quit so he will try to stop them himself along with help.

Missions
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gather info on the company.
seek others who know about this.
do your job and do not let the boss know what your doing.
find weapons to use against them.
Earn level security codes.

[Dungeon Warden]

Suburban ninja:

I find it strange that a ninja would train a teenager. Most ninjas start training from the time they can walk. I hope you have a reason that the ninja wouldn't just kill the boy.

You don't say what happens next. What sort of missions could he do? Fight terrorist?

Postal espionage

Why would terrorists hire a regular postal worker? Surely they would only hire people they could trust. Why is it up to a lowly postal worker to stop them? Isn't this something better handled by the police?


Why not mix the two stories together. A teenage boy, trained as a ninja, gets a delivery job to earn some extra money, and gets mixed up with terrorists in the process. Now the postal worker has ninja skills and the ninja has a specific mission to do.

If my idea isn't helpful to the stories you have already planned, please post more so I can understand where you are going with these ideas.

[Doan the Nado]

If you can explain some of the inconsistencies, I like the second one. Then again, the concept of the first one is cool: you could just make it where the boy is bullied a lot, so he starts training in several different martial arts and with a lot of weapons. He soon gets powerful enough to overcome the bullies, but decides he'd like to continue his training.

The terrorist operation one is a good concept as long as you can explain why he was hired in the first place, as well as how he managed to "overhear" such sensitive information.

[vespuleth]

i agree to everything said here.

[WarDragon]

I updated the info above. I just didn't have enough time to explain because i was at school.

[Dungeon Warden]

Suburban ninja:

"3 years later" - surely he wasn't standing there for three years - I assume he was living on the street the whole time.

"After long months and [of] training he finally becomes a ninja." - Wait a second, months? He stood around for three years waiting for the ninja to notice him and learned to be a ninja in a few months? It should really be the other way around - and even then, no one learns a martial art in a few years. Maybe he would be ready to go out on missions after a few years, but he couldn't be called a ninja in the true sense of the word.

I do like the ninja idea over the postal worker one, so this one gets my vote.

Postal espionage:

The rewrite sounds more possible then the old version except for: "One day while working he noticed a package that looked like an ak-47." No one in their right mind would wrap up an ak-47 and try to mail it. Don't you watch action movies? Guns are always hidden in crates - fruits crates, museum crates, rice sacks - anything large and heavy enough to hide the fact there are guns hidden inside. What should happen is that a crate is accidently dropped and he sees a gun sticking out and calls to police. That would make more sense.