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Post by millivanilli on Mar 9, 2005 10:59:02 GMT -5
this is a game with a samuri that was rased by knights because his dad was killed by nijas and his mother is forced to marry the roler of the nijas " I cant say much now im in school ill explan more later"
hell's rain is not being made no more cause this idea
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 9, 2005 11:20:07 GMT -5
most of you new people might think im new but im not The reason its called spirt of the blade is because u inharet your fothers sword and you must set him free by killing the nija king aka the basterd that killed your dad  when you kill him your dads spirit is free and you get to see him for the first time in ur life after that is the end of the game it will be along on because its like a lord of the rings / samuri vs nija game. On the way you will meet sevral charecters your name is kitenshi and your best freid yo-kama i wanna make this game where your freinds dont stay behind you but they wonder off and go battle people instead of just staying behind you. ( Lord of the rings part) Well your on the jurney to save your mom and u will inconter elfs and warlocks and other misticale creaturs anther freind u get will be alfenia a archer chick elf that will help u through the scared forest she is also on a jurney to kill the nija lord for burning down her home ( the forest of lost dreams) On the way you will meet some evil vilans shanui the dark elf of the hell's land hantuishen a dark samuri sworn to the nijas ( rival) o-pan-yanshi the troll of the holly mountain terror the final boss yu-si-gotshi nija lord that has takin ur mother "the dashis ar pauses to help u under stand ther names" For more detales reply ps sorry about my spelling |
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Post by The Final Rune on Mar 9, 2005 15:04:00 GMT -5
I like the idea of having the extra characters do there own thing. Can't tell yet if you plan on having the player play out these other characters as well, or if we just hear/witness the story as the main character, guess I'll have to wait and see.
I like the large cast of characters and the oriental/mid-earth blending. I think it'll make for an intresting kind of world.
Can't wait to hear more. 
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Post by Neo Samurai on Mar 9, 2005 15:44:59 GMT -5
I like the idea of your party members goin' out and fighting other enemies.
You didn't explain your story well enough. It almost sounds a bit cliched. Probably because you summarized it in a couple of paragraphs. If it's not much trouble, can you write more about the intro scene? Like, write it as if you were writing an actual story (kind of like Will, Doan, and TFR. I think they did this real well).
I'm sorry if it seems like I'm being a hard-ass. I just like to know more about your storyline.
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Post by vespuleth on Mar 9, 2005 17:42:19 GMT -5
im totally with ... *whoever just posted* more details would be great. however, i have one thought....
if hes already a samuari (sp??) why does he need to be trained by knights? if hes trained by knights, wouldnt that make him a knight, and not a samauri...?
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Post by vespuleth on Mar 9, 2005 22:30:34 GMT -5
will, im honored to make your 'suggested reading' topic. but perhaps links would be more appropriate? if you want to get me links to all the original locations of those statements, ill make a sticky for it. because i think its something everyone should read. so please feel free to do so.
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Post by vespuleth on Mar 10, 2005 0:52:20 GMT -5
if i stickied it, would you refer people to that instead of posting all of this over and over again?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2005 0:55:06 GMT -5
Yes, thank you, that would actually save me a decent amount of time.  |
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 10:36:30 GMT -5
K............... well i dont care what you guys say i dont critisise your games so why do do it to mine i think that is stuiped now hear what i think. If i made the game like what you guys are saying then it be like id be making your game and u know what its mine so just lay off.
"the reason why theres not much details is beacuse i was at school and my teacher said i had to get off the site to all those that want me to give more info.
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 10:43:24 GMT -5
Well your raised by knights your dad was killed in the beginig and the intro is the replay then a bunch of knights go through the town to see if there are any surviors and you are the only one beacuase you mom swore she would only marry the king of the nijas and the king of nijas said leave him there to rot so they left and when they did the knights looked for survivors. i hope that answered your question.  |
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 10:44:53 GMT -5
No william.
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 10:49:23 GMT -5
I mad this topic than started posting.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2005 10:57:46 GMT -5
My bad, I misread your message Ves: Yes, I can get links to most of the original topics. The one with my earlier quote and thelastbigfall's is somewhere at the Blood and Iron Boards, but they're pretty short so we could probably just repost them in the sticky topic. Kingspoom's are here: www.rpgmmag.com/issues/issue_4/guides_advice_faqs.html . Yours is in tigger's Rune Stone topic (I editted your post when copying some though). My later quote (the first part of the quote) is originally at this topic at the Pavilion: www.pavilionboards.com/forum/showthread.php?t=581 , but I post the exact same thing there (minus the first paragraph I typed for millivinilli). Include the cliche list too. However you do it is up to you, I don't mind. |
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 11:02:52 GMT -5
Well im trying to plot this all out but when i get more ideas i will be posting them! ;D
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Post by vespuleth on Mar 10, 2005 11:06:46 GMT -5
cool, ill set it up. thanks.
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 10, 2005 12:13:38 GMT -5
i for got zaroff the fake fathe he is a inportant charecter in this game he rases you because your parents are (A) dead (B) captured he is the knight leader and teaches you how to weld the sword and then ther is
Glafored he teaches you the way of the samuri and gives you your fathers old sword that has his spert in it
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Post by vespuleth on Mar 10, 2005 18:16:38 GMT -5
both knighthood and samauri are lifelong practices. you should decide that he is either a knight or a samauri.
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Post by Doan the Nado on Mar 11, 2005 2:31:35 GMT -5
Some stories can be very interesting when you throw together a bunch of characters. They're usually more fantastic and less believable, but that doesn't mean they're not entertaining.
One example is the movie Van Helsing: the action in that movie was pretty awesome, but the brew of miscellaneous legendary characters certainly wasn't believable.
My point is this: I think that some of us (*cough* *cWoiulglh*) forget that we are making games, fantasy games. They do not have to follow your pattern of realistic, modern day names, completely believable background stories, stunningly sensible settings, and perfect flowing plot. It is perfectly okay to make a game that puts all kinds of interesting people in one place and says, "what would happen now?" I mean, Kingdom Hearts was a game that was pretty out there, but a lot of people list it among their favorites.
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 11, 2005 10:58:41 GMT -5
yeah well you'r not a knight it just your fake dad teaches you how to weld a sword so basically your not a knight your a samuri.
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Post by Neo Samurai on Mar 11, 2005 19:53:43 GMT -5
The idea itself actually sounds pretty cool. However, sometimes, placing it in a summary makes it sound typical or cliched. I understand if you just thought this all up, but if you've been thinking about this for a while and have a basic breakthrough of the intro scene of the game, it would be cool if you posted it. This idea could really work if done well enough. And if you really commit yourself to it, I know you can do it. |
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 14, 2005 11:14:09 GMT -5
Thank You.
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 16, 2005 11:05:03 GMT -5
There will be a secret ending it has somthing to do with terror the final boss
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 22, 2005 11:12:02 GMT -5
I wanna make it to when you ride a horse that you can stick your sword out on the side and kill some one that way like chop of there heads
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Post by millivanilli on Mar 24, 2005 11:19:23 GMT -5
Witch demo would you guys rather play hells rain or this one it is ergant i must know.
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Post by Hedrum on Mar 25, 2005 0:45:16 GMT -5
I like the idea of your party members goin' out and fighting other enemies. You didn't explain your story well enough. It almost sounds a bit cliched. Probably because you summarized it in a couple of paragraphs. If it's not much trouble, can you write more about the intro scene? Like, write it as if you were writing an actual story (kind of like Will, Doan, and TFR. I think they did this real well). I'm sorry if it seems like I'm being a hard-ass. I just like to know more about your storyline. You almost sounded like Will there.  What? It's Jimmy now? |
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when you kill him your dads spirit is free and you get to see him for the first time in ur life after that is the end of the game it will be along on because its like a lord of the rings / samuri vs nija game. On the way you will meet sevral charecters your name is kitenshi and your best freid yo-kama i wanna make this game where your freinds dont stay behind you but they wonder off and go battle people instead of just staying behind you.
