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Jun 3, 2007 23:44:34 GMT -5
Post by realitybites on Jun 3, 2007 23:44:34 GMT -5
This is what Ive been working on lately, this is where most of my games and other paraphernalia will be located. damienthefreak.com
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Jun 9, 2007 11:29:23 GMT -5
Post by Joey MURDERFACE! on Jun 9, 2007 11:29:23 GMT -5
Awesome, I will be sure to check it out in a bit.
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Jun 9, 2007 17:23:13 GMT -5
Post by Doan the Nado on Jun 9, 2007 17:23:13 GMT -5
Wow... I just read your bio. Crazy story, it truly is. I'm glad that you made it through and are with us today.
Slight comment on your writing: I like it, but in general it's hard to read long paragraphs like that. Try to break it up into logical sections with some whitespace (a blank line between sections). That makes it much easier on the eyes, and helps the reader avoid losing his place. Also, you might want to add some padding to the text's containing element, because the text runs right up against the border, and again, a little space would make it look better.
All in all, it's a good site, and I like what you've done.
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Jun 9, 2007 21:42:39 GMT -5
Post by realitybites on Jun 9, 2007 21:42:39 GMT -5
Yeah, I plan to rewrite it Monday, as it is my next day off work, but if I become ambitious enough I might do it tonight.
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Jun 11, 2007 0:09:19 GMT -5
Post by NASH7777 on Jun 11, 2007 0:09:19 GMT -5
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Jun 11, 2007 0:45:22 GMT -5
Post by realitybites on Jun 11, 2007 0:45:22 GMT -5
Very nice Brock.
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Jun 13, 2007 3:07:51 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2007 3:07:51 GMT -5
Yeah, it's cool.
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