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Post by Doan the Nado on Aug 26, 2006 13:36:22 GMT -5
I have finished the first page for the Mag (I hope). Please check it out, read what I've written, and let me know what you think. If you think anything should be changed, please let me know. doanthenado.com/files/mag_page_sample.pdfSorry the file is so big, but I couldn't really help it with all those pictures. |
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Post by thetruecoolness on Aug 26, 2006 14:03:33 GMT -5
I think it looks good. I can't see anything I would change with it, as it looks pretty professional. Good job.
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Post by realitybites on Aug 26, 2006 14:06:52 GMT -5
Yes very well done Doan
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Post by Neo Samurai on Aug 26, 2006 16:23:54 GMT -5
Great job, Doan. Like TTC said, it looks very professional.  |
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Post by Bigfoot on Aug 26, 2006 22:28:06 GMT -5
I like it alot!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2006 0:35:45 GMT -5
Yes, me too! ;D Very good job!  |
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Post by Doan the Nado on Aug 27, 2006 0:43:59 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. I'm glad it's rather well-liked (so far). ;D
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Post by BloodKnight on Aug 27, 2006 1:54:58 GMT -5
I don't like it.
The PDF size I mean.
Otherwise, it rocks!
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Post by OblivionWolf on Aug 28, 2006 19:27:12 GMT -5
Looking good. It will fit in well with another certain article.  Keep up the good work. |
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Post by Doan the Nado on Aug 29, 2006 9:48:59 GMT -5
Sorry to keep everyone waiting on the second page, but I have been really busy with moving these past couple of days, and I've only had an internet connection at work. I'm getting hooked up tonight, though (supposedly), and I will definitely have it submitted tomorrow.
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Post by Doan the Nado on Aug 30, 2006 23:39:21 GMT -5
Well, my two pages are now finished, although they have not been proofread. Please read it over and let me know what you think, if anything should be reordered, reworded, or whatever, as I typed this all up rather quickly. Thanks for all your help. The link: doanthenado.com/files/mag_pages.pdfNote: I made the images slightly lower quality so that the download is not so huge. |
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Post by Neo Samurai on Aug 31, 2006 11:30:15 GMT -5
Very good job! You've made the right choice with those tips. |
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Post by NASH7777 on Aug 31, 2006 15:54:25 GMT -5
Well I feel I better comment. So "I like" ;-)
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Post by OblivionWolf on Aug 31, 2006 17:40:22 GMT -5
w00t!  |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2006 6:41:23 GMT -5
Okay, gotta say, I'm lovin' it!!! ;D ;D ;D I'll try to help though like you said, so I would say (just me!  ) 2nd Page_ Under 'Focus on balance' 'Make sure that every action is equally usable' to 'Make sure that every action is equally appealing' Um, I dunno. I think if you just read through it and edit little tiny things like what I mentioned that'll be great. Either way though, awesome job mAHn!!! ;D |
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