Dragon Knight Remake

[WarDragon]

I'm going to remake my first successful game on rpg maker dragonknight. Which many of my friends have played. It's an original story, with an very unique story line. You start off collecting bracelets for your king. these bracelets are special because the more the person has the crazier and greedier he gets. Once yoiu found them all the king will send you away. His advisor Tipan has been controlling him through subliminal messages. Later You find out that the king is having a party called the Nighten Gale at a secret location. He will invite the world leaders that was established after the lacroa war To destroy them all. Tipan has other plans he want's to destroy the mjor cities and take over taizon. You must defeat him.

20 Side quests
Custom Menu
2 Mini games
Might will be a cbs containing dungeon warden's battle character demo.

[Dark Knight Of Lodis]

"crazier and greedier" Is this the only thing that the bracelets do? If it is...why would anyone want them, unless they believed they did something else?

[Deleted]

To make the story appealing you'll have to do more than summarize. Hopefully what you've said here is only a tiny fraction of the actual story in the game.